Well he is only trying to help so be nice. You want to get better don't you? We all have room for improvement and need a friendly critique from time to time. The problem is better in the color, but still wrong. The eyes are roughly the same size even though her head is turned which would make the farthest one smaller than the nearest. The eyes are also both too close together in both the color and B&W. Good drawing, Just a friendly critique.